New Haiku
The other day I posted a poem of a student and my version of said poem. Here's my follow up:
I made a mistake
Don't touch someone else's art
Your haiku is yours
Tonight I ate out and wrote these (in the order in which they appear) all in the eatery:
In this restaurant
diners are oddly at ease
loudly confessing
Mom keeps on eating
and texting, while her son throws
things out the window
"This man was sitting
nicely, so he gets dessert,"
she says to her son
After forty-nine
comes fifty, not fifty-one
and not yet sixty
I admire strong
What I don't care for is blunt
G-d, give us wisdom...
2 Comments:
dessert!
nice Haikus, I don't always read them!
Fixed. Thanks.
Edits welcomed and urged.
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