Sunday, December 13, 2015

String Haiku

Sometimes I can feel
The kite pulling on the string
And sometimes I can't.

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We have strings attached
and so we are each held back
from really flying

Prompted by HaikuHorizons

6 Comments:

OpenID rhymeswithbug.com said...

hmm... these leave me with much to ponder. well put.

December 13, 2015 at 8:46 PM  
Blogger Archana Kapoor said...

food for thought... both of them... but loved the second one more.. :-) Cheers

December 13, 2015 at 10:39 PM  
Anonymous Marie said...

Great image.

December 14, 2015 at 2:25 PM  
Blogger Georgia Koch said...

insightful haiku ... I loved the write. Bastet

December 15, 2015 at 3:53 AM  
Blogger Milan Rajkumar said...

Filled with deep philosophy !

December 15, 2015 at 7:43 AM  
Anonymous jazzytower said...

Like them both, favorite is the first one.

December 15, 2015 at 11:53 PM  

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