Sunday, January 04, 2015

Circle Haiku

With gratitide to Haiku Horizons for prompting this:

Our lives, our circles
Groups next to, groups within groups
Circles in the sand

6 Comments:

Blogger kishke said...

Modern-day circles
Live in smartphones and laptops
Friends we make online

January 4, 2015 at 11:01 PM  
Anonymous Reading Pleasure said...

Beautifully written!

January 5, 2015 at 12:46 PM  
Blogger payal agarwal said...

Well said! Loved this haiku.

January 6, 2015 at 9:20 AM  
Blogger kishke said...

Take 2:

Modern-day circles
Round and round and round online
Lost in hyperspace

January 6, 2015 at 7:38 PM  
Blogger Alice said...

I LOVE this one. It is a very modern truth.


friends we make on line
the other side of the earth
may never hold hands


https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/01/05/pins-pins/

January 6, 2015 at 9:40 PM  
Blogger kishke said...

Very good, Alice!
(I actually updated mine a bit in our exchange at haikuhorizons, and responded to yours).

Typing in the void
Can you pray in bits and bytes?
Invisible friends

January 7, 2015 at 10:39 AM  

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