Sunday, November 23, 2014

Stored Haiku

Life is like a store
You grab whatever you want
Then you pay the price

This week's prompt from Haiku Horizon's is "store." You may also enjoy what I wrote for their previous promt- "cold," which I got done too late to link to on their site.

If I have the time, energy, and inspiration to think of more on "store," I think I'll put them in the comments.

11 Comments:

Blogger kishke said...

Toy store wonderland
Full of things I'd never own
My joy and sorrow

November 23, 2014 at 9:01 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Nice.

November 23, 2014 at 10:33 PM  
Blogger kishke said...

Tbanks.

Actually, in re-reading, I'd change "I'd" to "I'll."

November 23, 2014 at 11:06 PM  
Blogger Judith Westerfield said...

Imaginative, creative!

November 23, 2014 at 11:30 PM  
Blogger Sun Bloom said...

Good one. :)

November 24, 2014 at 9:09 AM  
Blogger kishke said...

Thank you, Judith. (Assuming you meant my haiku.)

November 24, 2014 at 10:45 AM  
Blogger kishke said...

Wait, no, of course you meant Neil's! I hadn't noticed it before. Was it up last night?

Anyhow, I like it. It reminds me of the Chazal -- עולם הזה כבי הילולא חטוף ואכול חטוף ואכול.

November 24, 2014 at 10:46 AM  
Blogger Alice said...

This is very thought provoking. I can think of a wide range of prices (high and low and nothing at all) that one could be asked to pay.


PS: Sorry. Wordpress will not post a comment on blogger, so I've opened a blogger account to leave comments. Here is the link to my wordpress post:

https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/23/one-buddhist-thought/

November 24, 2014 at 9:40 PM  
Blogger Usha Menon said...

A good one !

November 26, 2014 at 2:50 AM  
Blogger Locomente said...

So very true...
Essence of life expressed in so few words!

November 26, 2014 at 6:28 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

The Grinch was right that
Christmas can't be sold in stores
So many things can't

November 29, 2014 at 9:40 PM  

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