Sunday, November 02, 2014

Hope- Tanka and Haiku

A Shul of old men
filled with their whole lifelong songs
and pieces of hope

Sometimes a tanka
leaves more room than a haiku
for conveying hope

Instead of saying
a bird that flies she called it
the thing with feathers
thus allowing it to slip
gently inside of your soul


OpenID hope-2 said...

Interesting..the story on the story in tanka and haiku:)-

November 2, 2014 at 10:08 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

The Haiku Horizons thing is neat. I see this week's prompt is "cold." Here's my offering:

Into the warm house
I touch my hand to her neck
And say, "cold fingers!"

November 19, 2014 at 11:21 PM  
Blogger kishke said...

That was me as well.

November 21, 2014 at 1:10 AM  

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