Monday, March 17, 2014

Levels of Haiku

We will never move
If we stay on the level
Where the issue starts

There’s a foundation
Understanding is built on:
Frustration and pain

Sometimes we rise up
To the expected level
And make a dream real

There is a level
Where the world greets poetry
May we reach it soon

We must take caution
As we proceed up levels
To climb the right stairs

Age does not define
One’s emotional level
It’s just a number

Prompted By http://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/

6 Comments:

Blogger Locomente said...

So very well done!
Nice compilation :)

March 18, 2014 at 5:36 AM  
OpenID rajkumarmilan said...

a bouquet with different fragrances ! love them all !

March 18, 2014 at 1:56 PM  
Blogger Tom MacInnes said...

Well now, wasn't that just a wonderful collection of Haiku!? I loved them all but, my favourites were the one where the world meets poetry..........wouldn't that place be paradise? Secondly, age is just a number........you are exactly correct. Thanks for sharing such creative and insightful work. :)

March 18, 2014 at 9:20 PM  
OpenID alicekeysmd said...

What an impressive set of poems. I enjoyed them all.
Alice

March 19, 2014 at 10:02 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

I am so grateful for the positive feedback!!!

March 19, 2014 at 8:57 PM  
Blogger Reshma said...

Fabulous set, the last one is the bestest if there is such a word :)

March 20, 2014 at 3:35 PM  

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