Levels of Haiku
We will never move
If we stay on the level
Where the issue starts
There’s a foundation
Understanding is built on:
Frustration and pain
Sometimes we rise up
To the expected level
And make a dream real
There is a level
Where the world greets poetry
May we reach it soon
We must take caution
As we proceed up levels
To climb the right stairs
Age does not define
One’s emotional level
It’s just a number
Prompted By http://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/
6 Comments:
So very well done!
Nice compilation :)
a bouquet with different fragrances ! love them all !
Well now, wasn't that just a wonderful collection of Haiku!? I loved them all but, my favourites were the one where the world meets poetry..........wouldn't that place be paradise? Secondly, age is just a number........you are exactly correct. Thanks for sharing such creative and insightful work. :)
What an impressive set of poems. I enjoyed them all.
Alice
I am so grateful for the positive feedback!!!
Fabulous set, the last one is the bestest if there is such a word :)
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