SHARP HAIKU
Reb Shlomo Carlebach
was the only one ever
to say I looked "sharp"
"You gotta look sharp
gottaa have no illusions"
So says Joe Joe Jackson
They mean it as smart
to me you're the other sharp
you can cut and pierce
Sudden and abrupt
a sharp turn by an old car:
how I perceive you
Sharpness and softness
one rests under the surface
the other on top
I find life to be
sharp like a double edged sword,
smooth in the center
Of myriad knives
the tongue is the sharpest one
and it is so soft
The truth is so sharp
she needs to get all dressed up
in colorful tales
Sharp clever remarks
Mistakenly get called jokes
and are laughed away
The pen beats the sword
they say, but forget to add-
the pen must be sharp
Roseanne Cash observes
G-d is in roses and thorns
in each moment's world
Prompted by Haiku Heights
10 Comments:
Sudden and abrupt
a sharp turn by an old car:
how I perceive you
^My favorite
Simply great!
wow!!! spectacular! i loved the pen, life and the tongue ones :)
wow...impressive thoughts
love the variety of ideas
and thoughts
Peace
What an inspired set!
Fun haiku! Very inspiring.
You got me at: Reb Shlomo Carlebach!!!! Oh my gosh, flood of memories.
1967
Student
University of CA, Berkeley
I'm studying for an exam and hear this loud, joyful singing outside.
Go to window and Rabbi Carlebach is leading a HUGE group - people of all ages - down the middle of the street. He looks up, smiles and waves to me to join.
I go back to studying and 47 years later still regret my decision.
LOVED your post!!!!!!!
very sharp haikus ! beautiful !
"The tongue IS the sharpest one...So glad you included that line♪ Nicely done! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/look-sharp/
Thank you all for the feedback.
Sorry for not addressing each of you personally. Sorry too for the word verification, thanks for weathering through it. Sorry if I did not comment on each of your haiku- I hope to.
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