Sunday, January 05, 2014

4 Haiku - Save Your Applause For The End Of The Post


Till Daddy gets home?
How about when he gets there?
Applaud for your dad

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Once at Billy Joel
my friend's girlfriend got annoyed
when I was clapping

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A thunderous sound
made by G-d and by our hands
Lady Gaga's need

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How does one hand sound?
A commonly asked question:
Two hands sounds better

These haiku were inspired by the prompt- "clap"

6 Comments:

Blogger Apurva Kandicuppa said...

I loved the last one! :)

January 6, 2014 at 7:22 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Thanks. i think, though they're all birthed by me, that's probably the strongest one.

Clap is a challenging prompt.

Thanks for the comment AK.

January 6, 2014 at 4:58 PM  
Blogger Lmkazmierczak said...

Lovely snippets of real life‚ô™ Happy 2014 still! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

January 7, 2014 at 4:57 AM  
Anonymous Reading Pleasure said...

Wonderful

January 7, 2014 at 11:13 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Thank you L and R. Your (plural) feedback means a great deal to me.

January 10, 2014 at 1:19 AM  
OpenID alicekeysmd said...

All three are nice. I like how REAL they are. Both hands are better.

http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/01/10/sound-of-creation/

January 10, 2014 at 3:02 PM  

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