4 Haiku - Save Your Applause For The End Of The Post
Till Daddy gets home?
How about when he gets there?
Applaud for your dad
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Once at Billy Joel
my friend's girlfriend got annoyed
when I was clapping
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A thunderous sound
made by G-d and by our hands
Lady Gaga's need
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How does one hand sound?
A commonly asked question:
Two hands sounds better
These haiku were inspired by the prompt- "clap"
posted by rabbi neil fleischmann @ 11:39 PM
6 Comments:
I loved the last one! :)
Thanks. i think, though they're all birthed by me, that's probably the strongest one.
Clap is a challenging prompt.
Thanks for the comment AK.
Lovely snippets of real life♪ Happy 2014 still! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/
Wonderful
Thank you L and R. Your (plural) feedback means a great deal to me.
All three are nice. I like how REAL they are. Both hands are better.
http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/01/10/sound-of-creation/
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