Sunday, November 14, 2010

I Contradict Myself: Four Early A.M. Haiku


after someone dies
it feels like a lifetime passed
since that day it did

somewhat insecure
a bit unsure and broken
you and i can talk

it is hard to talk
from different constellations
even when you shout

jane wagner says that
we are all in this alone
despite what "they" say

2 Comments:

Blogger Ask Teacher Pam said...

"after someone dies..." is with me all the time now--I had to memorize it to keep it safe. Todah, RN

November 16, 2010 at 11:08 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

the first three words fit as a title. thanks. thanks too for the high praise. i like this one, it came from a moment of inspiration. i said that it felt like a long time since my friend told me that another friend lost her mother. my friend replied, "i wonder how long ago it feels for that friend?" maybe i should take this one offline - save it for book. it's precious to me.

November 16, 2010 at 2:38 PM  

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