Tuesday, May 05, 2009

Ki Im Lishmoa Et Divrei Hashem

G-d am I thirsty
lo tzama al hamayim
but not for water

3 Comments:

Blogger kishke said...

Beads form
Sweat trickles past open lips
Mouthing holy words

May 5, 2009 at 11:21 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

really nice! i like that you'e able to write haiku that's not 5-7-5.

Perhaps one day I
will write poetry that does
not conform to form

May 6, 2009 at 12:05 AM  
Blogger kishke said...

Thank you.

May 6, 2009 at 11:24 AM  

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