Thursday, April 05, 2007

He May Not Follow Lesson Plans

A lovely frum couple walk to their room
Erev Pesach 5767
Camp Isabella Freedman

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Thanks to Shoshana for pointing out an article about "a teacher who really engages his students." It paints a picture of 81 year old Arnold Blume who remains sane and talented enough after 49 years of teaching (29 years regular, 2 decades subbing regularly) to rivet students four days a week as a substitute. This man's ability to share of himself in a way that humans who were born onto a different planet than he was is remarkable.

The following is the piece of the piece that jumped up and bit me:


Barbara W. Andrews, North Middle’s principal, said Mr. Blume had carved out a niche at the intersection of teaching and oral history. He may not follow lesson plans as much as some would hope, and he has been known to talk a little too much about himself, she said. “But Arnie brings something to our school that no one else brings,” she said.

In that paragraph you find all you need to know about the typical school administrator.

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Another thing that struck about the article is that it's an article. Articles follow formulas. I would be less aware of this if a journalist and a photographernfrom The Record didn't once watch me for a day in school. The outline of what was done in each case is remarkably similar, Very early on both pieces mention the classroom number, and the age of the teacher. Very soon they each turn to quotes of what the teacher says to the class, and how the kids react. Then they turn to remarks from the students and from an administrator about the subject of the article.

Thank G-d, when I was written up in a major newspaper the assistant principal quoted was one of the kind, wonderful, caring ones.

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The cliche' works in poems


as it works in any kind of writing - badly.


Do not use the cliche' in a poem unless, perhaps,


you are writing a poem about the cliche'.

-Mary Oliver


That quote comes from A Poetry Handbook, which I bought on erev Yom Tov.

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I think improvising is under appreciated in life. I improvise a lot when I present publicly. I've learned to trust that - to some extent. My two major talks on Y"T were topics I've never spoken on before. I was juggling davening (I davened Shacharit and Musaf from the Amud as well as laining and being Gabai) and logistics while anxiously anticipatng may talk and what I'd say. It went well - I think - thank G-d.

On Shabbos I'm slated to speak on love in Judaism (ala Shir HaShirim), and I really need to gather my thoughts. One idea - a speaker today mentioned that some see Shir HaShgirim as metaphor and some see it as about man and woman. She left out a possibility, that some see it as both.

9 Comments:

Blogger Shoshana said...

Glad you could appreciate the article. Have a great Shabbos!

April 6, 2007 at 8:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like your photos from the camp. Looks like a lovely spot, but very wintery. I guess spring arrives late there. (Everything is green and blooming here.)

April 6, 2007 at 8:56 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

When I consider sliches in my writing I am struck by how good a lot of them are, I guess that's why they became cliches. Like "peircing silence" or "icy blue" they really work a lot of times to describe the situation and its too bad we can't use them. Glad you are enjoying your chag.

April 6, 2007 at 1:35 PM  
Blogger Pesach Sommer said...

Please tell. What did you mean by the typical administartor line.

Good Shabbos

April 6, 2007 at 3:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

cliche

like tight lesson plans
overused, beg: infuse with
improvisation

April 6, 2007 at 4:35 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Thank you all for your comments. B"N - I'll elaborate on administrators in the comment areas later soon (a cousin of accidentally on purpose).

Dorothy couldn't think of an original name for her dog...until she named him Cliche'!

Maayan's heart writes
in original haikus
but what's her real name?

April 6, 2007 at 6:40 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

That's Dorothy Parker.

April 6, 2007 at 6:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Gut Vuch. I have always thought of Shir Hashirim as both the love story about a man and a woman AND a metaphor. It is through what we can understand in our own relationships that we come to a deeper understanding of our relationship with HKBH. I have always found Shir Hashirim fascinating in its extreme, powerful insights into human nature...and of course, who couldn't love all of the great songs from our youth that are found within.

April 11, 2007 at 10:12 AM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Thank you MSB - good comment. Thanks to to everyone. I think I'm goint to let this thread go for now and am available off blog to discuss further.

April 13, 2007 at 11:25 AM  

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