Tuesday, July 19, 2005

A Written Affair

Years of loyalty
bordering on dependance
then one day things changed.

Which makes me wonder:
is my diary jealous
of my nice young blog?

3 Comments:

Blogger torontopearl said...

Love the poem. Wanted to ask: do you still note this and other shared personal poems elsewhere in your personal files, or just record it on the blog and that's it?
I have to find a way to manage my poetry--I used to write everything in longhand and then record it in a personal file online.

July 19, 2005 at 4:21 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

That means a lot to me. i don't get much feed back on the poems here.

Lately I've just been saving in the blog. Presently i have two broken computers. It's not good.

July 19, 2005 at 5:54 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

By the way, did anyone notice that this poem consists of two haikus?

July 19, 2005 at 7:03 PM  

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