Haiku, Just Haiku
Just one thing fails me
Whatever that one thing is
One can't be enough
I just want to be
objectively fairminded
I want to be just
Just exactly that
absolutely, totally
just thoroughly just
Just when it seems that
you can't possibly succeed
try just one more time
Everything just is:
healthy, sick, married, alone
Thank G-d for your life
8 Comments:
Very positive and inspiring.
I just want to be
objectively fairminded
I want to be just
I like the way you switched the order in the first and last lines. Very clever.
Just will become joust
by adding a letter. Oh!
Sometimes more is less.
Just will become jest
by changing a letter. Eee!
Just ain't that funny.
Love how you used the prompt twice in many of the haiku - added meaning and rhythm for me.
I just want to say
you just about covered all
forms of just justly
I enjoyed this dance of haiku very much. Fun!
I enjoyed this dance of haiku very much. Fun!
I enjoyed this dance of haiku very much.
Just dance, DJ says!
Life's not a game, says my mom.
I just wanna read.
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