I Saw Something I Never Knew
Tomorrow night is my mother's yahrtzeit (sic) (sigh). In the previous post I cited Zelda. This poem is inspired by and dedicated to 3 important women in my life. I am appreciative of the feedback this poem has received (see comments).
My Balance Was Removed
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Speaking of my mother's death
on the phone late that night
the lady bug appeared
A creature I hadn't seen
since childhood -
maybe thirty years.
Still, she looked as striking;
eight divine black on red spots.
I gazed closely and counted.
She crawled gracefully
as I transferred her
from pen to paper
And then I saw something
something I never knew
and my balance was removed
Lady bugs can jump
and fly
to Heaven
5 Comments:
Yahrtzeit is a tough time. Thinking of you. Beautiful poem.
this is a beautiful poem; really, really nice and different. thanks for sharing.
Thank you PS. I know you're with me.
Thank you LG. The poem is influenced by Zelda's style (I think), and by my mom, and by the person that I was speaking to while the experience took place.
How wistful and lovely. The essence of bittersweet.
Miss Trudy,
Thank you for the succinct, articulate, high praise. I love and appreciate each word you chose.
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