Tuesday, July 06, 2010

Sharpness Tanka

It’s hard to admit -

Fact is I can be quite sharp.

I have to stop that.

How much is “I’m sorry” worth?

Not as much as change through work.

5 Comments:

Blogger Anne D said...

Me too, and I agree.

July 6, 2010 at 10:39 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Imperceptible
that's how it is for many
and yet it's still wrong
sensitive people get it
we should and must know better

Thanks, you're comment, and my already in the works brooding, produced this new tanka.

July 7, 2010 at 4:10 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Everyone has things to work on changing.

Sharon

July 7, 2010 at 8:42 PM  
Blogger rabbi neil fleischmann said...

Well put. Thanks Sharon.

July 7, 2010 at 11:10 PM  
Blogger kishke said...

Nah, don't stop. It's part of your personality. Just make sure the recipients know you're only kidding.

July 7, 2010 at 11:49 PM  

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