Call For A Ceasefire
Dear Fellow Earthlings,
I hail from your planet
Take my words for it
Alien as they seem.
o
The others and I
We mean no harm
Frightening as we are
Poets come in peace.
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- Neil Fleischmann
posted by rabbi neil fleischmann @ 7:58 PM
4 Comments:
Perfect and beautiful
Thank you a million times. G-d Bless You Pesach.
I give this a "10", Neil.
Wow. Thank you Anne. That means a lot to me. Do you have any advice, any fire to light under me, any way to assist ambivelant, hesitant, sloth like me regarding how to take a poem that an experienced, talented writer rates a ten, and getting it published?
In any case your being here and reading and giving me your honest opinion just made my night (don't know how I missed this comment till now, but the timeing turned out right).
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